The Name of the Wind: Review

My name is Kvothe, pronounced nearly the same as “quothe.” Names are important as they tell you a great deal about a person. I’ve had more names than anyone has a right to. The Adem call me Maedre. Which, depending on how it’s spoken, can mean The Flame, The Thunder, or The Broken Tree.

So begins the grandiose blurb for Patrick Rothfuss’ debut The Name of the Wind. It made quite a splash when it came out in 2007, but since I am perpetually behind the times I didn’t get to it until this month. I wavered over reading it because the blurb told me next to nothing about the plot, and I wasn’t sure if I would like the voice–it sounded too arrogant to me.

This is the story of Kvothe’s life, told by his older self, in hiding from the world as an unassuming innkeeper in the middle of nowhere. He is still a young man, but haunted and broken, and I was instantly moved to wonder what ordeals befell a man of such power and stature. He is discovered by the Chronicler who persuades him to tell his story, to counteract the legends and lies that have sprung up in his abscence. Kvothe tells of his childhood as a member of a traveling troupe, his time as a street urchin after the murder of his parents, his admission and studies at a University of Magic. He tells of the passions of his life: mastering magic, hunting his parents’ killers (the semi-mythical Chandrian) and his love, Denna.

This book is well-written and finely-detailed, but my interest in it waxed and waned. A strain of elitism in the opening chapters irked me, where more “enlightened” characters feel superior to the superstitions of priests and peasants. The character of Kvothe came perilously close to being a Mary Sue (a Martin Steve?): he was a child prodigy at music, magic, stagecraft, and pretty anything he set his mind to.  I half-expected Kvothe to bring together a gang of plucky child-thieves in Tarbean where he ended up after his parents were murdered.

However, Kvothe grew to be a more sympathetic character, gifted but flawed. I was moved by his struggles to overcome his desperate poverty. So many of the risks he took were not only due to arrogance (though there was some of that), but also so he could feed and clothe himself and pay his tuition. I was both exasperated by and interested in his relationship with Denna–exasperated by his effusions over her, interested because their later interactions were warm, wary and witty; a potent mix. The most magnetic pull for me was exerted by the older Kvothe, the one on the other side of the ordeal, the one telling the story. What can I say? I’m a sucker for wounded characters.

Plotwise, this book meandered. As the first third of Kvothe’s story, there was no real resolution. I cannot fault the writer for having a 2,000-page story to tell, but it was an unsatisfying experience for me as the reader. The threads of the story have barely come together by the end, and my ambivalence toward this 600-page volume makes it unlikely that I will read the next 1200 pages. I’m in a minority, though, because most other people love this book. I offer a link to a more positive review to balance my own (see, I’m ambivalent enough about this book to do just that *grin*).

Made to Stick: Review

Why do some ideas go viral while others disappear with nary a ripple? Why do urban legends and conspiracy theories make it halfway around the world before more worthy messages can even get their boots on? In this offering, brothers Chip and Dan Heath unpack what makes some ideas memorable, or “sticky”.

The authors found that messages that tend to stick around share many of six principles. These messages are Simple Unexpected Concrete Credentialed Emotional Stories, or SUCCESs.

This book attracted me as a writer, blogger, mom and homeschooler. I compete heavily in the marketplace of ideas. In order to reach other people, my ideas have to be memorable. I want my children to remember the lessons I teach, from values to the capital of France to the water cycle. Someday I hope to persuade people to buy my stories. I need to show them that my work is worth their time.

So, as I ponder what I’ve read, I’m going to apply these ideas to a pitch for Quartz, my revision project.

Let’s get into the six principles.

#1 Simple

Simple doesn’t mean simplistic, it means focusing on the core of your idea, the Commander’s Intent, the one mission-critical part of your message. The authors emphasize that if you say three things, you’re saying nothing.

Simple also means compact, in the way a proverb is compact. To be compact, you piggyback off of people’s existing schema. For example, the high-concept pitch for the movie Alien was Jaws on a spaceship. A title like Pride and Prejudice and Zombies is a pitch in and of itself. I once had a story pop into my head that billed itself as “King Arthur in Gotham City” and then vanished into a back corner with a Batman-like swoop. Someday, once I get all my current projects done, I will got hunt that story down…

Back to Quartz. Ignoring all its subplots (avoiding “feature creep”), I zero in on the heart of the story:

An ex-military diplomat and a free-agent demon-slayer join forces to find a natural vein of light-producing rock before their enemies do.

# 2 Unexpected

You use the unexpected to grab people’s attention. You cause their guessing mechanisms to fail. This failure causes people to pay attention. The authors warn against failing into gimmickry, though. You want to bring out the unexpected in your message, not bombard people with unconnected randomness. The unexpected must be “postdictable”–a surprise, but you shoulda seen it coming.

That’s what we writers call a twist. :D

So, here’s me twisting my pitch:

In a sunless world, an ex-military diplomat and a free agent demon slayer join forces to find a natural vein of light-producing rock before their enemies do.

That’s a bit better. I’ve provided context for the importance of the light-producing rock, which is also the twist: this is a sunless world, so your regular photosynthesizing plants can only be grown under artificial light. All of a sudden that light rock looks pretty important, doesn’t it?

#3 Concrete

The writers use the Aesop fable about the fox and the grapes as an example of concrete imagery that makes the abstract principle behind it easier to grasp and remember. In fact, when we think of it, so many ideas are encoded in concrete images that have made it into our common language. “Sour grapes” is one, and so is our household favorite, “don’t be a dog in a manger” (it cracks me up to hear Sir I. use it, because he doesn’t quite get it). Our speech is peppered with red herrings, green-eyed monsters, and other idioms.

Abstraction is the curse of expertise; concreteness is craved by the layperson. Concrete ideas are more memorable, and they provide a common turf between people.

In my pitch, enemies is too vague and generic, so instead I use:

In a sunless world, an ex-military diplomat and a free agent demon slayer join forces to find a natural vein of light-producing rock before it falls into the hands of an oppressive power-hungry regime.

#4 Credible

Messages can be made credible if they are supported by authorities (experts or aspirational figures). Additionally, details and statistics help messages be internally credible.

My pitch would be more credible if I had published a previous novel that you liked, had won some awards, or received an endorsement from another writer. Or even if your best friend had read my work, loved it, and raved about it to you.

I don’t have any of those, and I don’t know your best friend’s name, so the only thing I have going for me is some internal credibility–the detail that in a sunless world, other sources of light are vitally important.

#5 Emotional

In order to make people act on messages, they have to care. Messages can appeal to self-interest (the writers discuss Maslow’s Pyramid of Needs) or group identity (what would I person like me do?). My only goal is to entertain you, to make it worth your time to be in my imaginary world for a few hours. To do that I have to make my characters and their situation matter to you. If I bring out the high stakes a bit more, I get:

In a sunless world on the edge of famine, an ex-military diplomat and a free agent demon slayer join forces to find their world’s greatest resource—a natural vein of light-producing rock–before it falls into the hands of an oppressive, power-hungry regime.

#6 Story

Stories are powerful (as a writer and reader, I already knew that *grin*). The authors go into more detail into why stories are such powerful vehicles for messages, but I was more interested in the three basic story templates the writers elaborate on:

The Challenge Plot, in which the protagonist succeeds against formidable odds (David and Goliath)

The Connection Plot, in which people form a relationship that bridges a divide (Romeo and Juliet)

The Creativity Plot, in which someone solves some kind of mental puzzle (I imagine many murder mysteries fall into this category).

My story is primarily a Challenge Plot, with a Connection subplot.

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So, what do you think? Did I apply those principles to their best advantage in this pitch? Where could I improve, based on the SUCCES model?

Further Reading: The Simple Dollar reviews Made to Stick and uses the principles in a series of blogposts.

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I discovered Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson in December, one of my most exciting book finds of the year. It has an awesome premise (what if the prophesied hero failed to defeat the Great Evil?), an original and very cool magic system and appealing characters. It has adventure and romance, sacrifice and danger, armies and heists, grand balls and desperate missions, martial-arts-style magic and so much more. I loved Vin’s character arc–how she went from being this beaten-down street urchin to a confident courageous young woman. The sequel is wending its way to my mailbox soon (squee!).

Nathalie Mallet’s The Princes of the Golden Cage and The King’s Daughters draw inspiration  from non-medieval Western European sources. The first is set in an Arabic/Persian-type culture, complete with harems and eunuchs and a Grand Vizier. Prince Amir is one of the Sultan’s many sons, confined to the Golden Cage with his brothers until the Sultan chooses a successor. Amir has tried to be as unobtrusive as possible, avoiding politics and duels to the death as his brothers vie for their father’s favor. But now a mysterious force is murdering his brothers one by one and Amir is dragged in the thick of it…especially since he is looked upon as a suspect.

The sequel finds Amir in the northern Russian-inspired land of his beloved Princess Eva, where he sets about committing terrible faux pas and investigating the kidnappings of Eva’s sisters. I like Mallet’s willingness to be ruthless with her characters’ lives and emotions. The twist at the very end is something I did not expect, but makes total sense in hindsight. I’m looking forward to the next installment.

I finished Unseen Academicals (Terry Pratchett) in the nick of time–on New Year’s Eve. I found it to be more ponderous and less witty than I am used to in a Pratchett novel. Not to say it wasn’t good, but it didn’t feel as sparkly and pithy as most of Pratchett’s novels are. Still, Pratchett’s signature style–his humor, intelligence, and way with words–is stamped all over it. I love how he holds the Discworld up as a mirror in which we see ourselves.

Random non-fiction reads: Celtic Mythology (one of David’s college books from his not-quite Celtic Studies minor), Salt: A World History (very entertaining, but heavy on the recipes and tangents into the fishing industry) and The Bronte Myth (author Lucasta Miller sifts through the biographical material to trace the development of the half-truths and enigmas surrounding the Bronte sisters. I was disappointed at the lack of attention paid to Anne, but this exploration of how biographies are molded by their authors’ agendas, including those of Charlotte attempting to redeem the characters of her deceased sisters, is very readable and interesting).

That’s it for December! Any good books you read?

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I may not have blogged much in October, but I sure made it through a lot of books! I attribute this partially to the fact we moved the baby out of our room and into his own, thus allowing me to read in bed again. But only partially. I just like books a whole lot. :D

I snapped up the second and third Crosspointe novels by Diana Pharoah Francis. I like that each novel can stand alone, featuring new characters having their own adventures as part of a larger series arc. I found The Black Ship to be the more self-contained of the two (and, as an aside, amused that once again I found myself reading nautical fantasy and just as lost amongst all the technical jargon as I ever have been). In spite of his prickliness, I found Thorne to be a sympathetic protagonist and I was rooting for him the whole way. There was something deus ex machina-ish about Lucy Trenton’s infrequent appearances and the romantic subplot (if I can call it even that–it was so slight) felt very shoehorned in. What I liked best was how the crew of the black ship, faced with terror after terror (and yes, I enjoyed how things went from bad to worse to worst) forged a bond through it all. I eagerly moved on to The Turning Tide, but found it harder to get into. The multiplicity of the POVs made it hard for me to get behind any one character, and the singleminded (narrow-minded) perspective of the male love interest (save the female at all costs) just annoyed me. This book also felt incomplete, or at least, a bit incidental, because nothing seemed resolved on a personal or global level. I’m glad to know that there is a fourth book because I have a lot of questions!

I would probably not have come upon The Magicians (by Lev Grossman) on my own if the librarian hadn’t pointed it out. Think of it as a grown-up, grittier version of Hogwarts. An academically gifted student, Quentin has spent all his life feeling as though life was meaningless. The only way he can forget the loss is by burying himself in a series of kids’ books about Fillory (if you think Narnia, where siblings from our world have adventures in an other, you won’t be far wrong). When he follows a letter into an alley and finds himself taking an entrance exam to Brakebills, a college for the magically talented, he feels like he’s found his purpose. However, he finds that even magic loses its charm, until he learns that Fillory is a real place–and he can have a chance to go there. Grossman can’t resist swiping at Harry Potter (at one point a character remarks that magic is not being about waving wands while yelling made-up Latin), but he builds on, extrapolates from and opposes and turns on their heads the works of  Rowling, Lewis and Tolkien. I found that a pall hung over the whole book, as Quentin searches for a purpose, and finds that even magic cannot enchant him forever. He is not a hero, not a go-getter, and he makes some poor choices, and I felt that he never rose above that and learned something.

Also finished Storm Front, the first of the Dresden Files. How soon can I get hold of the next one? Just the fact that it does not romanticize vampires gives it an automatic ten plus points in my book. Dresden’s voice fits comfortably in the genre, and while the setting is unusual, the mystery conventions are nicely kept. Fun read.

My non-fiction reads were Into Thin Air, about the Mt. Everest climbing disaster, and A Charlotte Mason Companion by Karen Andreola for homeschooling resources.

What about you? What have you been reading recently?

Picture Books: Exploring Down Under

dot painting

(Artwork inspired by aboriginal dot paintings by Miss M and Sir I)

Wombat Stew by Marcia K. Vaughan and Pamela Lofts: One day, a very clever dingo catches a wombat and sets about making wombat stew, with a little help from the other animals. Fear not for the wombat, though! My kids loved this one and went around singing, “Wombat stew! Wombat stew! Gooey chewy, crunchy munchy, for my lunchy, WOMBAT STEW!” for days after.

Diary of a Wombat by Jackie French: This was a birthday present for Sir I from my Aussie writing buddy Jo. Features a sleeping-all-day back-scratching carrot-devouring hole-digging wombat who trains humans to feed her on demand. Very entertaining.

The Biggest Frog in Australia by Susan Roth: In the Dreamtime, the biggest frog in Australia wakes up very thirsty. He drinks up all the puddles, the billabongs (I added this new word to my vocabulary and I’ve been itching to use it ever since!), the rivers, the lakes, even the rain in the clouds. Now the frog is huge and swollen,  the land is dry and parched, and the other animals are suffering. They need to get all the water out of the frog, but how?

Bilby Moon by Margaret Spurling: A bilby is enthralled by her first sight of the full moon, smiling down at her. Her joy turns to distress on subsequent nights as the moon starts losing pieces of itself. She enlists the help of other desert animals to find the lost pieces, becoming sadder as the moon grows thinner and finally disappears. Then an owl tells her not to worry–she’ll be surprised again the following night when the moon comes back. A charming, reassuring story.

Stories from the Billabong by James Vance Marshall:  This collection of aboriginal stories from the Dreamtime has lovely dot painiting-inspired illustrations. Not all the tales are appropriate for my kids’ ages, so I picked only a handful of them to read aloud (usually the animal ones). We all enjoyed “How the Kangaroo got her Pouch”.

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August was yet another low-volume reading month. Writing, planning school, doing school, looking after my brood and occasionally doing a load of laundry and sweeping a floor or two should leave me hours and hours to devote to pleasure reading, right? Right?

Ha.

Okay, so I did read three books. Ta-da! Here they are:

Ship of Magic by Robin Hobb: I tore through most of this in a day or two, then lost interest in it for a while. I think I immerse myself in a book for far too long, and need to come up for air and get some distance before diving back in. I get like this over movies and such, too, *cough*BSG*cough*.

This book, like the Assassin trilogy, has the detailed worldbuilding  I’ve come to associate with Robin Hobb. Her settings, which include a lot of cultural, historical and political detail, feel very real to me. Unlike the Assassin trilogy, this book follows the storylines of four or five characters as they intersect and weave in with each other. The plot follows the fortunes of the Vestrit family, as their newly-wakened liveship Vivacia is taken from Althea Vestrit, who expected to inherit it, and given over to Kyle Haven, Althea’s brother-in-law. While Kyle coerces his son Wintrow to stay on board as a blood member of Vivacia’s family, Althea works to win back the ship. On land, Althea’s mother and sister try to keep the family afloat while reining in Malta, Kyle’s headstrong daughter. And the pirate Kennit cruises the waters in search of a liveship to capture and call his own…

The plot is nice and twisty and I liked the characters, even though there were times I wanted to shake them by the shoulders. It ended on a cliffhanger (of course!), so I need to head to the library to pick up Mad Ship.

Blood and Iron by Elizabeth Bear: Oh, this is the book that was giving me an inferiority complex a while ago *grin*. Gorgeous writing and intriguing premise, but I felt like I was viewing the story from behind a thick glass window. All this  emotional intense drama happened, but it came at me as if from underwater, all muffled and robbed of impact. I felt the same way about All the Windwracked Stars but I cannot resist Bear’s writing. I’ll be back for Whiskey and Water.

Reclaiming Childhood by William Crain: A timely reminder to enjoy children for who they are instead of pushing them to learn adult skills, and always looking forward to the next (parent-determined) developmental leap. It’s a call to meet children’s needs where they are right now, and to trust them to know what skills they’re ready to practise. He paints a rather rosy picture of childhood though. For instance, in his “Child as Naturalist” chapter, he talks about how their experience in nature makes children connected to the earth, and desire to protect and nurture and live peaceably with it. He obviously hasn’t seen my children –both whom love being outside–”kill” a maple sapling by whacking it with the largest sticks they could find. :P

What books did you read in August?

Picture Books: Mapping

Sir I. loves maps. World maps, treasure maps, road maps, atlases and globes. I got a kick out of his commentary on our road atlas yesterday in the van: “Wow, look, I found Florida! And the north part of Kentucky!” (Yes, this kid managed to decode the world Kentucky all by himself, too). Half a year ago, we did a unit study on maps and unearthed some great material on the subject.

Me on the Map by Joan Sweeney: This is an awesome first resource for mapping. The concept is simple: the girl draws herself in a map of her room, then her room in her house, her house on her street, and all the way out to her country on the globe. After we read this, we drew maps of various rooms in our house, found our town in our state, our state in our country, and so on, just like the girl did.

The Once Upon a Time Map Book by B.G. Henessey and Peter Joyce: More advanced–including grids, keys and legends, but the fairy tale maps are enchanting and detailed. My only complaint is that the maps are crowded, and it can be hard for little eyes to find things. And also, it’s out of print. Boo.

Which Way to the Revolution? by Bob Banner: Fun! Follow Paul Revere from Boston to Lexington, accompanied by friendly mice and thwarted by evil rats. Appealing simple maps and easy introduction to landmarks, map symbols and the compass rose. Sir I. loved it so much he requested I get it again from the library.

More on maps, for grown-ups too:

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So, er, I must’ve spent all month watching Battlestar Galactica or goofing off or something, because I only have two books in my reading roundup for July: In Darkness Hid by Jill Williamson and Teatime for the Traditionally Built by Alexander McCall Smith.

The McCall Smith books fill a need in me for a place where life is slower, more thoughtful, more rooted in the things of nature, in the waiting for rain, in cattle, in gardens eked out in a dry land. Even though there are evil-doers in the books (they are shelved with the mysteries, after all), a sense of honesty and simplicity and innocence pervades the series.

In Darkness Hid is one of the offerings by shiny new micropublisher, Marcher Lord Press, devoted exclusively to Christian speculative fiction. This is a genre dear to my heart, and I’m thrilled to see it getting such attention. I was pleased with the quality of the book, both in the cover design and production (it didn’t fall apart on me like I’ve heard horror stories of other POD books). It started off like your typical medieval fantasy, but Williamson did a good job bringing the setting alive with details, even the messy ones–the moths flickering around the torches, the dyer’s daughter trampling cloth in a tub of dye and urine, peasant boys who haven’t had baths in ages (*grin*). In a world where half the country has been shrouded in darkness for many years, Achan Cham, an orphan with no knowledge of his origins, and Vrell Sparrow, a duchess disguised as a boy, are linked through a magical gift known as bloodvoicing. The story is competently told, with some usual and some unusual fantasy fare, and enjoyable. The Christian elements were present, but not heavyhanded. I love the idea of ever-present darkness and I hope to explore those parts of the country in the sequels.

I’ve had a hard time getting into fiction much these days. I’m craving nonfiction–how-tos and manuals, books that have a more direct application to all the stuff in my life. Educational resources top the list, with art idea and creativity books not far behind. But I’m being good and started Elizabeth Bear’s Blood and Iron today, just a couple days before it’s due back at the library. I think I’m going to have to renew!

Around the World in Five Picture Books

A list of our favorite picture books about globe-trotting and different cultures:

How to Make an Apple Pie and See the World by Marjorie Priceman: This whimsical book chronicles a global quest for the finest ingredients for an apple pie. We like it especially because it includes a stop in Vermont for apples. Great to read after an apple-picking trip!

Toot & Puddle by Holly Hobbie: A charming account of two best friends over the course of the year. One goes off on a world tour while the other stays home and enjoys the turn of the seasons. I love that it portrays both the homebody and the adventurer positively.

Everybody Cooks Rice by Norah Dooley: While searching through her ethnically diverse neighborhood for her brother before dinnertime, Carrie learns that people from all over the world cook rice. Includes recipes!

People by Peter Spier: Oversized book shows not only cultural but individual diversity. There is a lot to see and talk about in this one. We spread it out over several days.

Madlenka by Peter Sis: A girl living in NYC learns about different cultures from her neighbors–and through the variations of her own name.

about reviewing

Alma Alexander’s post on reviewing writers (as in, writers who review other writers’ books, not the reviewing OF writers) popped up in my RSS feed as I was putting together my June reading roundup. It was timely because I always get this squeamish feeling before posting up reviews that are less than glowing. I like a lot of books, but I LOVE very few of them, and I’m not the sort to call a book “good” unless I really mean it. However, as a wannabe author, am I really brash enough to critique the works of people so far ahead of the game? Writers who have a lot more skill than I do? Writers that I might some day actually *gulp* meet?  Writing a novel is hard work. Knowing that, having experienced that, shouldn’t I be kinder towards other books?

One solution would be to not review books at all, but then you’d have a monthly list of books with no commentary. Or, I could review only the books I liked, and stay nothing about the ones I didn’t. So far, I’ve chosen to post my (tempered) reviews and stand behind my (tempered) opinions.

What say you? Do you read book reviews? What do you look for in a review? Do the rules of the reviewing game change if the reviewer is also a writer? If you do vent about books that push your buttons the wrong way, do you choose to not name them?