Magical Miss M

The tagline of this blog is “writer at play”, but my attitude towards my literary endeavors is more akin to steely-eyed clenched-teeth fortitude these days. I was eyeball-deep in one set of revisions for a couple months; I have since waded into yet another novel revision. While revisions do have their moments of mountain-high elation, I’ve missed just being playful with the writing and storytelling process.

So, to rectify this, I propose to post some kind of fun (playful!) creative exercise every week or so, if only to get my own juices flowing. This week’s exercise is a new magical system, inspired by Miss M.

Miss M., like other three year old girls, loves to dress up. Her base outfit may look something like this: a pink and brown striped and dotted dress (she LOVES dresses), tights with large polka dots (orange being the dominant color), and over that, bright green pants with a large floral pattern. She proceeds to embellish this outfit with any or all of the following: pink socks, ballet slippers, a fairy princess costume, a hat from Africa, mittens, apron, chef’s hat, tiara, plastic rings, beaded necklace, jingle bell bracelet, assorted pieces of winter gear. She isn’t above snitching her father’s comfy slippers, either.

One day, while watching Miss M dance around completely oblivious to the fashion horror sight she presented, I was struck by an idea for a new magical system. What if, said Right Brain, there existed a society in which magical spells were woven into articles of clothing? And the only way to utilize those spells would be to actually wear them? (Or is it the other way around? You could only use spells that were in contact with your skin, so that’s why you put them into clothes in the first place).

First and furious, other ideas and implications came pouring in:

The spells are closely tied to the physical aspect of the clothing. Type of fabric, dye, pattern, cut, embroidery–all played a big part. In order to modify a spell, you can add embroidery, put on a button, take off an inch of hem.

In order to maximize the number of spells available to you, you would try to wear as many clothes as you could. This society would have to live in a cold climate. Otherwise, it might be too hot and uncomfortable to be a magic-user!

Spelled clothing would be passed down through many generations–the bodice of Great-Grandma’s wedding dress could end up in Romilda’s coming-out gown, or as part of Uncle Abernathy’s vest. Magical items would be concentrated in the hands of families, rather than individuals.

Every magic-user (male or female) would strive to be a very good tailor!

The rich would have an advantage in being able to afford better quality materials.

Ballrooms would become the battlegrounds. Armor would be fans, jewelry, vests, shoes.

Imagine, the Underthings of Invincibilty. Ha!

And, best of all, people would match their clothing, not in terms of color or style, but with an eye to complementing magical power. So, why not wear a chef’s hat on top of a tiara, or mismatched mittens?

Your turn! Have you read or come up with any unusual magic systems (allomancy in Brandon Sanderson’s Mistborn springs instantly to mind)?

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a date, a date!

Earlier this week, David and I went out for a date, our first in at least two years (I think the last time we went out was when we left the kids–only had the older two at the time–with their Grampa and went to see the first Transformers in the theater). We had a friend (bless her!) put the kids to bed while we went to see Natalie MacMaster in concert (squee!).

It was awesome! The kids were so busy trying to impress their babysitter (and watch a movie) that we had none of the crying clinging dramatics I had feared. David and I got to drive down in the sub-compact rather than the minivan, converse without interruptions from the backseat, and not have to deal with coats and carseat belts other than our own.

And, oh, the concert was fabulous. The best part about it for me was unexpected. I had sorta vaguely thought we’d just be seeing Natalie MacMaster, but she had a band with her–pianist, guitarist, percussionist and cellist (I’d always considered the cello as a more sedate instrument, but no more). It is so much fun to watch people who love what they do make music together. Writing is creative work, but it is solitary. I’ve never collaborated with someone in a creative enterprise, but now I want to.

On the way home, the stars were brilliant and crystalline in the deep dark night sky. I say the Big Dipper (sideways) and Orion–incidentally the only two constellations I can actually recognize.

We returned to a house still standing, and quiet. Kids went to bed with no more fuss than they give us. We are so grateful to our friend for giving us this opportunity to have some out-of-the-house couple time.

Have you had anything special happen in your life recently?

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Happy Thanksgiving

After a long day of companiable cooking, recipes that turned out great, generally cheerful children, and lots of dishes, I’m pleasantly full and tired. But it wouldn’t be Thanksgiving without giving thanks.  As a writer, I am grateful for:

My husband, who has always supported my writing habit, and who didn’t even blink when I told him I wanted to stay home and write stories instead of getting a job early on in our marriage. He’s my cheerleader and sounding board and now he’s learning all about the craziness of writing life while NaNo-ing. He’s got less than 5K to go. Hurray!

My writing buddy, Jo, with whom I’ve been trading crits for years now (or at least it seems like it!). I can always rely on her honesty, her insight, and her support. The camaraderie we share in this often insane endeavor is precious.

One of my newest blog readers, Megs, also an aspiring author, who has cheered me immensely with her comments.

Living in this time and place, with the luxury of all these labor-saving devices so that I can work at my craft  instead of beating my laundry out on the river rocks or gathering firewood. Having a computer with a backspace key. Access to a library. Not having my creativity crowded out by worries.

The Internet, with its abundance of information. Writing workshops, writing courses, industry blogs, author websites–pretty much all I’ve learned about writing outside of actually writing has been via the Internet. I met my writing buddies online, I learned how to give and take crits online, I found all that I know about publishing online.

And my kids, who make me laugh, teach me it’s okay to try new and out-of-the-box things and fail, keep me humble and provide me with blog fodder.

There is so much more to be thankful for, but if I included it all, this list would be far too long. I’ll end with one last thing: I’m grateful for my almost-nightly mug of hot chocolate, provided by a loving husband, which fuels most of my wordage. Mmmm!

Happy Thanksgiving, readers and friends! May you be richly blessed today and all days.

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eureka!

Last night, I started to think of a story for an upcoming anthology I want to submit to. It wasn’t a new idea, but it snuck into my head with a first paragraph, a hard-edged character, and emotions–emotions tight-dammed behind walls of concrete, emotions desolate and sweeping like winds on the tundra, emotions as despairing as the sun winking out.

This was a story that said, LOOK AT ME!

So, I did and thought, Hmm, this might work for my intended market. I lay in bed, turning it over and dropped off to sleep, I presume, still thinking about it.

When I woke up this morning, it was gone.

I couldn’t remember the opening words that had grabbed me. I couldn’t remember the story. I couldn’t even remember if I had had a story, or if it was something that I had just dreamed up. All I had was this small hole, this nagging sense of loss.

I gave the story up for lost, or at least, misplaced. I probably wouldn’t get it back in time for that market, and so I went back to my original idea and did some mind-mapping for it while I was out in the yard with the kids.

Then I sat back at one point, shut my notebook, and stared at our beautiful immense willow. This is the tree that dominates our plot, that provides privacy without blocking out the sun, that I both love and fear (especially on windy days). It’s a tree I’ve known for five years, and yet today I looked at it as if seeing it for the very first time.

I looked at its deeply ridged trunk, at its thin whippy branches like long fingers, at the leaves dripping off the ends of their tips, trailing, veil-like, lace-like, hair-like.

Like a woman’s hair.

And I had it.

My lost story. And the picture it was based on.

One tree, one metaphor, linked to another tree in another picture, brought my story back to me.

It was like being given a gift.

So here I am, with a lesson: If neat story thoughts come to you right before bedtime, take a moment to jot them down. They might not stick around for the morning.

Any serendipity in your life recently?

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Visual Inspiration #4

(Click on the links for parts one, two, and three.)

This workshop requires the use of a good visual dictionary. I have the DK Ultimate Visual Dictionary, but the Merriam-Webster one looks pretty nice, too.

Flip through the book, stopping at pages that interest you. Take a moment to study each double-spread, enjoy the images, read the labels. Keep a pen and paper handy to write down any ideas, associations, phrases or memories that occur to you.

Here are my impressions during this exercise, in real time:

The first pages that catch my attention are entitled Fungi and Lichen. I look at the diagrams and can’t picture myself writing about volva and globa and soprophores (at least not with a straight face). One of the pictures reminds me of the walk the kids and I took on which we found a piece of bark covered with lichen. My Right Brain starts spinning worlds where–instead of trees and plants–there are forests of mushrooms and meadows of lichen. Fungi need organic matter to feed on, so maybe I should put my lichenous world on a massive branch of a World Tree. Ah, yes. Yggdrasil. Norse mythology and giant-sized fungi–I could go for that!

Next up, the pages on medieval churches and Gothic architecture. I love architectural terms: flying buttresses, lancet windows (staggered triple lancet windows, no less!), cinquefoil molding. Now I actually get to find out what all those are! Recently I read an article about an actress who turned a 1910 Catholic church into a residence. What else might a Gothic church be used for, aside from religious services or as a tourist trap? A hospital or orphanage during wartime. Turned into a hotel by some enterprising billionaire. A shelter for homeless people, a meeting place for some kind of secret society. Converted into a high-tech dance club–or a Virtual Reality nightclub??–in a dystopian future. Ooh, I like that one.

My third example: pianos. Not too surprising, since I have pianos and the playing of them on my mind a lot (plus I need to practice right after I finish this!). Right Brain throws in all kinds of piano-related associations: the Holly Hunter movie, the poem Piano and Drums by Gabriel Okara, Sea Mist and Moonlight Sonata and Fur Elise. What a complicated instrument the piano is! RB sends up slices and slivers of Stories That Could Be: a missionary’s wife bringing a piano into the jungle, a fabulous piano maintained through dark sacrifices, a family of little Borrower-type people living in an abandoned old grand piano, someone calling a piano repairer in the middle of the night, insistent on having him come out to repair a piano right away and offering a lot of money to do it…

In this exercise–in all of them, actually–the visual images act as lenses to focus RB’s attention. They’re lightning rods that attract memories, trivia, news stories, snippets of literature. It’s a way to bring many ideas together around some connecting thread, in the hopes of sparking a story. I believe stories are born of the unexpected and unlikely marriage of two or more ideas that, at first glance, have nothing to do with each other.

Happy writing!

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Visual Inspiration #3

I enjoy objects that are both beautiful and functional, thereby pleasing my aesthetic and practical sides. For this Visual Inspiration mini-workshop, I’m using three-dimensional arts and artifacts–furnishings, statues, pottery, plate settings, jewelry boxes, mirrors, masks, and more–to spark story ideas. Check out the Smithsonian website for tons of art to browse through. Pick something (or more than one thing) that catches your eye.

I’m going to use two examples, since I had a hard time picking just one.

My first one is actually two statues from the Indus Valley civilization–the priest-king and the dancing girl. I have an emotional and familial connection to these pieces, since my father grew up close to the ruins of Mohen-jo-daro. I’ve walked in the excavated streets and peered down dug-up wells and peeped out through the windows of these old old buildings. I am intrigued by these ancient statues and the obvious and inferred disparity between them–disparity in power, gender, clothing (or lack thereof). Juxtaposing those two statues, I’ve had glimmerings of what might some day be a story–sacrifices, immortality, river dolphins, ritual, dance, childhood. The questions I’ve asked myself: Who are these people? Why were they important enough to make statues of? What rites and functions did the priest-king and dancing girl perform? And most importantly, how might they have related to each other?

Part of the premise of my current work-in-progress was sparked by Faberge eggs. I started with the following questions:

What is the purpose of this object? What other uses can I come up with? Faberge eggs are curiosities, intended to delight and surprise. But perhaps you could hide something in them. A small piece of jewelry, a will, a property deed, a love letter.

Who would own or use such an object? Somebody rich, powerful. Or someone obssessed or gifted with amazing artistic talent.

Who has it now? Here you can twist the answer to the earlier question. In my example, the egg has passed through the hands of a mafia boss, a pudgy accountant, and now is in the possession of water elementals.

Who wants this object and why? My protagonist, who is being threatened with the loss of everything she holds dear unless she recovers it. The people threatening her, who wish that the thing hidden inside never comes to light. The water elementals, who do wish the thing inside unleased.

Your turn!

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Visual Inspiration #2

This is the second in my Visual Inspiration series–an intentional way of immersing yourself in images, giving your right brain plenty of opportunity to come up with ideas. Today I’m going to talk about using collages to spark a story. This is fun because you get to do, not just look. Get some scissors, a glue stick (less mess than regular glue), a sheet of paper and a stack of magazines.

This technique is simple: Go through the magazines and cut out pictures of anything that strikes your fancy. These could be images of objects, swatches of color, a cool pattern, a word or phrase, whatever. Once you have a bunch of them, try arranging them in different ways on your paper. You may find yourself abandoning some perfectly decent images because they don’t fit the mood of your collage. That’s fine. I had a nice looking Irish castle that I set aside because it was far too ostentatious and sunny to for the tone of my collage. Once you’ve picked your pieces and arranged them, glue them to the paper.

Here’s the one I did:

story collage

story collage

Now, ask yourself questions.

What is the mood of this collage? What adjectives jump to mind when you look at it?

Somber. Mysterious. Ancient. Hidden. Cold. Trapped. Feathered. Twilit.

What are the common elements in these pictures?

There are a lot of dark cool colors in here, purples and blues and greens.  A lot of stone–rocks on the beach, in the mosaic. Some of the patterns look like prints in stone. The feathers hint at brighter colors and warmth.

What are some of the surprising connections (these are what will spark the most interesting ideas because they suggest conflict)?

Why are the feathers in this collage? After all that brick and stone, they bring life and warmth, but it is a trapped life. I have this sense of a tropical bird far from home in a cold place, with mysterious life-draining rituals. And what’s with that college library with the lit windows on the left side? It doesn’t quite fit the collage, as if there were two timelines or stories running parallel to each other, intersecting only… where? With the finding of a stone artifact or a feathered cape?

… and so on.

Again, the answers to those questions will spark more questions. Follow these rabbit trails. Be inspired.

Till next time.

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Visual Inspiration #1

My right brain is a magpie. It likes pretty pictures and shiny things. It thrives on drama, loves to touch things it shouldn’t, plays in the sand, is fascinated/repulsed by fungi and gets very excited over news reports of giant squids. Since this is where some of my best writing and my neatest ideas come from, I indulge my right brain as much as I can.

Right Brain loves landscape pictures. It loves the way the camera captures height and breadth and depth; it loves the colors, the lighting, the textures, the emotions. Here’s an exercise for using these images to inspire Right Brain.

Browse through these pictures, and pick one that leaps out at you. It might be hard to pick just one, but the others aren’t running away. You can go back to them later.

Take a good look at the picture and start pinging Right Brain with questions. Here are a few to get your started, with my answers for the picture I picked.

How does this picture make you feel? What adjectives spring to mind when you look at it? A sense of loss. Of things prematurely taken away. Desolate, fragile, threatening (personal and universal), sad, cold-killed, lull between storms, silent weeping, frozen tears, broken, snapped. Something bad has happened but it’s not over yet.

What’s the one thing that strikes you most about it? That broken tree with frosted branches sweeping the ground like hair. Slender and trailing, it reminds me of a girl. A broken girl.

What’s beyond the edges of this picture? Where does the road go, what’s behind the mountain, what’s hiding in the trees? Some kind of storm, waiting to pounce. There are other trees, too, but they are too far away, too far to have sheltered and protected this one. There is a village nearby, gouged into a cleft, hiding from the storms, and a lake.

Put a character in this picture (human, alien, animal, personification, whatever). why is it there? What is it doing? The tree itself is (was) a character. It was woman once, and there is a woman now staring at it. A woman who sorrows for the tree, and fears and rages that she must now transform and take its place. The trees are protectors of the village, but they are losing their battle against the elements, dying young.

Right Brain is taking the Apollo & Daphne myth and giving it a twist, turning the transformation into a duty, part of a battle strategy, instead of a flight response. It’s pinging me with words–rooted, matriarchy, mother trees, sister huts, children, cold rage. I have the germ of an idea, a seed pearl of a story.

These are just starter questions. Let the answers you get guide you to the next set of questions. Keep them simple: Who? Why? What? When? How? Your response to this picture might be the inspiration for a new story–or at least, a fun creative writing exercise.

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Five Things for a Writer to do in the Great Outdoors

I admit it: I’m a homebody. A lazy couch potato. A sedentary slug-like life form. If it weren’t for my children, I’d happily spend my days tapping away on my laptop, reading in the rocking chair, or doodling at the dining table. Nature? I can enjoy it from the window, thanks. If I lean to the right, peer over the neighbor’s rooftop, I have a mountain view–a small blue-grey slice of New Hampshire.

But since I have squirrelly children who need to be taken out to burn off energy (when, oh when, are they going to create the first child-powered batteries?), I’ve learned to enjoy (and cope with) the great outdoors. Along the way, I’ve discovered that yes, being outside is a help to my writing, a boost to my creativity. Here’s how:

1. Enjoy the sun: We in the Northeast have learned to get soak up as much sunshine as we can. Not only does the summer sun builds up those reserves ofVitamin D, it also clears away the cobwebs of doubt and discouragement crowding my head. All those negative thoughts shrivel away like little vampires. Its a lot harder to wallow in gloom and self-pity with the sun beaming down upon me.

2. Dig in the dirt: Ah, yes, my yearly spring fling with gardening. Not only does it give me something productive to do while the kids are off digging holes in the ground or making hay out of grass clippings, but the process of gardening–the preparing of the soil, weeding and watering, the waiting and transplanting–serve as a good reminder that creation takes time. That all seeds and stories need incubation, before they burst into bloom and fruit. Patience is a skill important for both gardeners and novelists.

3. Get exercise: The dreaded ‘e’ word. I hate exercising for exercising’s sake (you’ll never catch me on a treadmill unless I was getting paid for it), but pair exercising with a chance to window shop, gawk at the neighbors’ renovations, take pictures of plant life, chat with my husband and tire out my kids, and I’m all for it. Sometimes getting those leg muscles going is just the thing my brain needs to start those mental gears whirring.

4. Study my surroundings. Grass is green. Bark is rough. Rain patters. Sure, we all know that. We’ve read the books, seen the pictures, maybe even walked through the grass and past the trees on the way to somewhere else. But take the time to actually sit in the grass, study the texture of bark, and listen to the rain. Rain doesn’t just patter–it hisses and sizzles, too. The corpses of birch trees are mummified in their own smooth papery bark. Stubbly grass prickles underfoot. This year I’m getting a lot of interaction with slugs. Not my preferred nature experience, but I imagine they’ll crawl into a story or two soon.

5. Build a fairy house. What this has to do with writing, I’m not sure–maybe I can make some analogy to plotting, perhaps??–but hey, it’s fun to do. Not everything has to funnel into writing, right? Right?

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fantastic cityscapes

I love cities with character, and I love reading books set in them. Regency romances set in London. Science fiction in bizarre domed cities on other planets. Underground cities. Walled cities. Cities held in the arms of gigantic trees. Cities of spidersilk and magical glass. Ancient ruined cities. It’s my urban upbringing, I suppose, continuing to exert a fascinating pull.

Here’s some freewriting I did for Blackburn, the city which is the setting of Out of Shape. I wanted a handle on the city, turning it into a bit player, and solidifying it in my mind as the setting for future stories:

The sun never shone in Blackburn. The tall dark buildings marched shoulder to shoulder, closing ranks against the light. The sky was never seen in Blackburn, either, for the black smog hung low and thick like oily clouds. Occasionally, from the industrial district would come the belch and roar and hiss of fire shooting up tall chimneys; fire that fountained into sparks and quickly died amidst the gloom, and a movement of air would bring the sooty taste of smoke to the lips of the few pedestrians hurrying through the streets, eager to be inside.

The streets of Blackburn belonged to the machines. Trolleys trundled by on tracks; cars swung from cables overhead. Where they came from, where they went, no one knew. Sometimes empty, sometimes full of mysterious boxes and bundles, other times groaning with the weight of rusty iron and snapped cable, they came from the sullen gloom of the outerlands of Blackburn and disappeared into that same eternal night. For most, the machines were a backdrop to life in Blackburn, the clatter of wheels and whine of gears lullabies to Blackburn babies. There were people whose job it was to work with the machinery; soot-smeared cable boys as agile as monkeys; muscled trolley lads and raucous bridge workers. In the depths of Blackburn, down through many levels were more machines, bigger machines that demanded fuel and belched fire and there were operators down there, moving like shadows amidst the fiery furnaces – but polite people did not talk of them.

There were many ways of living in Blackburn, but for the majority, most of the living happened indoors; in apartments as close and hot as ovens, in smoky bars and noisy pubs, each with their doors and shutters closed tight against the bitter-tasting air. Blackburn was a city of darkness on the outside, but every time a door opened, it revealed a glowing orange interior, bright and jewel-like, quickly hidden again. The pedestrians who had been so wary upon the streets, muffled in scarves and coats, heads down and eyes sliding sideways, shed their outer clothing in layers, unfolded their bodies and became merry, laughing raucously. Sometimes a snatch of their laughter, the muffled groans of organ-grinders, the pounding of nailed boots upon bare boards in a jig, would drift out into the silent streets where the machines and their human workers went about their tasks.

Which cities, real or imaginary, your own or someone else’s, are you fascinated by?

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