sunday progress

In the past week, I revised (or wrote from scratch):

16.5 out of 62 total scenes.

So far, so good. The next section includes a LOT of new material so my next progress report will not be so dramatic. Onward!

In other exciting news, I became an aunt (again) this weekend. My sister had her first baby!

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summer school

I usually take summer off from serious writing, probably because seventeen years of schooling has ingrained in me the sanctity of summer vacations. This year, though, I hit the actual revising part of HTRYN at the beginning of June. Yes, folks, all of what I’ve been doing since January(!) has been prep work for this. Now I’m working with a hard copy of my manuscript, marking it up, writing out new scenes and all that fun stuff. Can’t stop now!

So, no summer vacation for me this year (but the kids are getting one–barring light school in math and reading–and I’m off the hook for prepping lessons, yay!). The Plan is to be done with the revision by the end of August. To keep myself honest, I’ll be posting weekly progress updates and I expect you guys to poke and prod me if I get lazy, k?

What about you? What are your summer projects?

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friday fun: twist a fairy tale

June is Fairy Tale month here at the playground, in honor of Miss M’s birthday. Today’s Friday Fun is to twist a fairy tale! Here’s a couple of ways to get you started.

  • Change genres or setting. Use a high-concept movie pitch: Rapunzel in space! Cinderella in an anime! The Little Mermaid meets Jaws in the Bahamas! The Brave Little Tailor meets Godzilla above Tokyo! Okay, those last two were a joke….but if they inspires you, feel free to use them. :D
  • Use this prompt: You’re out and about and suddenly you see this woman with long past-her-feet-and-beyond hair. Write a story about this. The setting could be NYC, a New England college town, a colony on the moon. The woman could be dressed in a wedding gown, hair spilling down her train, and getting out of a limo, or she could be wearing gingham and walking fast, hair bundled under her arm, not looking at anyone.
  • Use the They Fight Crime! generator to reimagine fairy tale characters. For example: “The Beast’s a lonely alcoholic photographer haunted by memories of ‘Nam. Beauty’s a ditzy winged safe cracker with an incredible destiny. They fight crime!”
  • Ask why and keeping asking why. Why did the princess in The Princess and the Pea have to undergo a sensitivity test? Because the royal family wanted to keep the bloodlines strong. What does sensing a pea have to do with keeping bloodlines strong? They’re magic bloodlines, and the test is really to check for sensitivity to magic. So the pea is a magic pea? It only looks like a dried-up pea to those without magic. It really is a gem of magical power. Why did the princess come dripping and wet out of the night? She was on the run from an evil sorceror who’d been keeping her captive…. or so she said. Why’d she say it if it wasn’t true? Because she was really a magic con woman after that dried-up pea/powerful gem. And so on.

Have fun. :)

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mosty-wordless wednesday: boston

look down, look down, that long steel track…


girl as statue

look, ma, there’s a picture in the ground!


uss constitution: oldest commissioned ship afloat


round and round the flowers she goes…what, you thought i’d go to boston and not take pictures of flowers??

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reading roundup, again

You can find the first part of my May reads here. On to the last four books;

  • The Double Comfort Safari Club by Alexander McCall Smith: I love this series. These are comfort books for me; a chance to experience a slower simpler lifestyle, to immerse myself in the deep calm still thoughts of a middle-aged African woman. I love being transported to a land of dry and wet seasons, of red bush tea and charming store names, a land both exotic and familiar.
  • The Ruling Sea by Robert V.S. Redick: The sequel to The Red Wolf Conspiracy finds our young heroes, tarboy Pazel and ambassador’s daughter Thasha, still very much in danger. The machinations of the Arquali empire to provoke war and theambitions of dark mage Arunis only suffered a setback at the end of the previous book. In this sequel, as the enormous Chathrand sets off into the Ruling Sea for her date with destiny, the youngsters try to find allies to help stop the conspiracy. It’s hard to compress the various convoluted subplots into this short review, but if you like sprawling multi-layered plots, you’ll like this series. My biggest complaint about this book is that the main characters didn’t do much more than react for a large part of the book (after Thasha’s spectacular deception at the very beginnning). I also have conceived a passionate loathing of Sander Ott and at this point mere death is too good for him. Grrr. Horrible man.
  • Smith by Leon Garfield: Backstory on how I came to acquire this book in the first place: When I was a kid one of my favorite books was this fat volume full of excerpts from somebody’s list of great (Bristish) children’s literature. Since the Internet was unheard of at the time, and the state of libraries in Pakistan is dismal (ie: there are no public libraries—I had access to the meager collections at my school and the British Council libraries, and my mom had a membership to a privately owned library that mostly had romance books), this volume was my ticket to books I wanted to read. It introduced me to Joan Aikin’s Midnight is a Place, Ruth Park’s Playing Beatie Bow and Margaret Mahy’s The Haunting (“Barnaby’s dead, Barnaby’s dead. I’m going to be very lonely”–never fails to send a shiver down my back). It also included the first chapter-ish of Smith, in which a child pickpocket in eighteenth century London witnesses the murder and search of a man who he has just divested of an important document—that he can’t read. I never forgot that excerpt, nor my desire to know what happened next, even though I was never able to find the book. Fast forward to a couple months ago and I was reminiscing to my husband about the books I read as a child and mentioned Smith as the one that got away. He was obviously taking notes, because he tracked a copy of the book (it’s out of print) for my birthday (he is so wonderful!). It was weird reading this book, because it kept tugging me back to my childhood memories of poring over that volume, but cool, too! Hang in there, my ten-year-old self–you will get to read this book when you’re 30!
  • Alcatraz vs. the Evil Librarians by Brandon Sanderson: This, along with Warbreaker, was another one of my birthday presents. David obviously feels that we need to own and read every book Sanderson has written (with the exception of the Wheel of Time ones). Very different from his adult fantasy, like Lemony Snicket, but more upbeat. It certainly makes me giggle to think that ninja Librarians secretly run the world, but I suppose I have been deluded and brainwashed like the rest of the Hushlanders. I’ll have fun sharing this one with the kids when they’re older.
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writer back in the house

I’m baaaack from our weekend trip to Boston. We walked, went up and down escalators and stairs, and rode the train and took the T. Oh, and also did some sightseeing. The kids did really well, even though we kept them out and about for twelve hours on Saturday (whew!).

The kids’ artwork today consisted of subway maps and trains. Transportation made the biggest impression on them, hee.

So, how was your weekend?

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fairy tales 1

Miss M. and I are both fascinated by fairy tales. She likes them because they have princesses (and wicked stepmothers and princes and horses). I am intrigued by them, often not by what they contain, but what they leave out. Characters act illogically sometimes (Why did Snow White keep opening the door to peasant women even after all those attempts on her life? And why, knowing that the girl was so addle-brained, didn’t one of the dwarves stay home to protect her?). Details are pregnant with meaning–but I don’t know what that meaning is (why a pumpkin, for instance?). I am irritated by the many passive females in them, by Sleeping Beauty for falling asleep, by Snow White for constantly needing to be looked after, by Cinderella for oh-so-patiently enduring her servitude.  So I twist fairy tales, to fill in the gaps, to flesh out characters, to reframe them so that they make sense to my modern mindset.

Yet there is a universality to these tales, that tug at the heart and at the deep dark places of the mind, that echo across cultures and generations. There’ s something primal about them–when I play with them (and I have whole folder of writings entitled Fairy Tales!), I feel like I am coming back to drink from some old old well. Something about curses and magic, about men being transformed into beasts, the power of true love’s kiss, of giants and witches and trolls; all these seem to come out of psychic landscape that all humans inhabit.

How do you feel about fairy tales? Which is your favorite fairy tale?

Here is one of my own light-hearted experiments to understand, and give a context to fairy tales. I’m particularly fond of this one because I managed to allude to so many stories in one go.

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reading roundup

Whoa. I read eight books in May and reviewed none of them. I’m going to add my (hopefully) brief comments in a two-part May reads series. The first four books I finished last month were:

  • A Game of Thrones by George R. R. Martin: This book brought out my Goldilocks complex. It was a shade too epic, too gritty, too populated. In the end, while I was pulled into the story and the characters, I hated that some characters were Too Noble to Live (ie: they died for being naive enough to think that others were honorable like them), and that Martin could make me care enough about them to feel horrible when bad things happened to them. Plus, this is supposed to be a seven-volume epic that is not yet complete with lots more death along the way. My nerves will not take it, so I end with the first volume.
  • Reading in the Brain by Stanislas Dehaene: Ah, I finally finished this rather academic and densely-written book. It was certainly interesting, but I wish it could’ve been lighter on the technical jargon. The term “occipito-temporal” will forever be branded in my brain.
  • For all the Tea in China by Sarah Rose: This was a very accessible and quick read. It chronicles one the earliest incidents of industrial espionage, when Great Britain stole both tea plants and the knowledge of tea making from China in order to bring both to their Indian colonies and break the Chinese monopoly on tea. Fascinating, and duly filed away for future inspiration for a story!
  • Fire by Kristin Cashore: This companion novel to Graceling takes us to the eastern lands, beyond the mountains. Here, instead of graces, you have monsters—beautiful captivating creatures. Fire is the last of the human monsters, able to read minds, with a beauty that everyone desires. She is caught up the political turmoil of the kingdom–fomented in large part by her monster father–to help the young king keep his throne. Fire struggles to understand her own role in the kingdom’s future, to put limits on her power, to find love and acceptance and belonging. The novel got off to a slow start, but Cashore conveys the desperation and danger and tension very well. So many of the characters—the king, his commander and brother, Fire herself–were so heartbreakingly young (in their twenties at most) that it made their story–the bold plans, the military slogs, the battles–all the more poignant. All these kids taking on the roles of adults! I think being 30 has started to affect me. :)
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further adventures of Snow White & Cinderella

So, Miss M. comes into the kitchen while I’m making dinner.

Miss M.: How ’bout you be Cinderella and I be Snow White? Cinderella is cooking.

(By now you can probably tell why I always get to be Cinderella.)

Me: Yep. Working hard.

Miss M: And Cinderella’s prince is mowing the lawn.

(This is true. My prince was, indeed, out mowing the lawn.)

Me: Yes, he works very hard to keep up the palace lawns.

Miss M: *casually* Snow White’s prince died before her birthday.

Me: Oh. That’s very sad. What happened to him?

(I know, I know. I really shouldn’t go there, but… morbid curiosity, so…)

Miss M: Oh, he didn’t get enough water.

Me: So Snow White’s prince is a plant got dehydrated? That’s too bad.

(I really, really shouldn’t pursue these Cinderella/Snow White conversations, but I can’t help wondering what’s going to come out of her mouth next!).

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dandelions

Since I don’t have a lot of my own flowers yet (I’m mainly focused on growing vegetables), I’ve been snapping the wildflowers that are growing of their own accord. I love how peering at a common dandelion through a camera lens turns the mundane into the magical, turns the common into a thing of rare, delightful beauty. This is what I try to do when capturing an image, a moment, a feeling, into words–to describe the ordinary in an extraordinary way.

So, dandelions:

(We think David probably took this picture. Oh, to have two photographers of dandelions and only one camera!)

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