fairy tales 4: more retellings, and online resources

Last week, I highlighted our favorite picture book versions of fairy tales. This week I want to focus on what I truly love (more so than the originals)–fairy tale retellings!

Robin McKinley’s Beauty is the first fairy tale retelling I ever read. I loved how it fleshed out details, made the characters easier to like and empathize with, how it made sense. Since then, I’ve always been drawn to fairy tale retellings: Mercedes Lackeys’ Elemental Masters series which marry reimagined  fairy tales with elemental magic in Edwardian England; Gail Carson Levine’s Ella Enchanted which finally finally gave a more plausible reason for Cinderella’s predicament (besides an unnaturally meek personality!); yes, even the movie Ever After, hopelessly utopian and impractical ideals and all (not to mention that wince-inducing line about Danielle being taught by a master swordsman—who died when she was…. eight?); Jim Hines’ The Stepsister Scheme featuring a trio of kick-ass princesses.

What are your favorite fairy tale retellings? I’m always on the lookout for more!

Can’t get enough of fairy tales? Check out SurLaLune for annotated fairy tales; Andrew Lang’s various color-named  fairy books at Project Gutenberg; plus some e-zines: Cabinet des Fees, Enchanted Conversation and New Fairy Tales.

Any other great online fairy tale resources I missed?

    title linkage

    A few months ago, I did a series of posts on book titles. Well, over at DGLM, they’re discussing the same tricky issue. I also came across Barry Eisler’s posts on considering the resonance of titles, both automatic and acquired. I’d never looked at titles quite that way before.

    And Paperback Writer has a list of tools to help you come up with titles.

    word play

    So, anyone up for a little game?

    Sir I. was playing this phonics game, which involves him making and reading nonsense words. The first word he made was “prete”, which sounded to me like it should mean “prattling moralistically”. Sir I. thought it sounded like a large orange-and-yellow fruit. His next word was “fleash”. Sounds like something a zombie would want, “Fleash! I need fleash!”.

    Want to help me come up with definitions for the following “words”?

    • splipe
    • frube
    • zond
    • yame
    • stuke

    sunday progress update

    29 out of 64 scenes.

    I wanted to hit 30 today, but revising during the kids’ Quiet Time didn’t happen (the Baron was really fussy) and I got a late start this evening (I just sat and stared zombie-like at my screen for an hour, then stuffed my face with tortilla chips and chili con queso). Ah well, I have a green card for my next scene; the last one before a whole string of from-scratch scenes.

    I also got to play with one my favorite scenes in the book–a scene I moved up in the timeline–and I really like where it is now. It includes this delightful interlude over a platter of stuffed mushrooms.

    How are your writing/revising projects going?

    a reader’s take on e-books

    Last week I downloaded the Kindle app for my PC.

    This is actually a big deal for me. See, I’ve been following (sorta, on the periphery, drifting in and out) the news about the explosion of e-books sales. Recently Amazon and B&N dropped the prices of the Kindle and Nook to less than $200. Writers are turning more and more to digital self-publishing to take advantage of this growth; author JA Konrath, for instance, turned down print publishing contracts to self-publish on the Kindle.

    To which I had always just said, “Hmm.” Because, in spite of all the hype and the convenience of acquiring e-books, several reasons have stopped me from taking the plunge into e-books as a reader.

    First, and most importantly, I have never been able to read novels online or on the computer, barring the ones I do for “work”—writing and revising my own, or critiquing other people’s. I don’t even have the attention span for long blog posts. When I read short fiction online for market research, my mind wanders (yep, that’s my brain on computers). The Internet is too distracting, the computer screen is too hard on my eyes, whatever the reason I haven’t been able to do it.

    Secondly, I get gadget-overload. Dealing with cords and cables and batteries and power… ugh, I can’t even keep my cellphone charged up! Plus, I spend way too much time on the computer anyway–writing, blogging, emailing, puttering around–and reading a book is a way of getting away from all the electronic devices in my life.

    Thirdly, e-readers (which might solve some of my problems by being lightweight, portable and less prone to causing eye strain) are really expensive. Even with the recent price drops, I wouldn’t spend more than a $100 for a gadget I *might* use. I test-drove  a Nook briefly at a B&N store, but I would need to bring an e-reader home and play with before deciding to purchase it. I wouldn’t just buy it off the bat. On a related note, many e-books are just as expensive as my preferred reading format–mass market paperbacks–and far more expensive than my preferred delivery service (free from the library *grin*).

    And the e-books that are free or cheap are probably written by aspiring writers who have not yet learned the craft, and their quality is likely to be…. uneven. Since I value my time (or really should! :D ), I’m not willing to dig through what’s essentially a slush pile in order to find gems. At least when I go to a bookstore, I can be assured that all the books there meets certain minimum standards; that they will be mostly free of typos and grammatical error, that the quality of the prose won’t liquify my eyeballs or cause my brain to run away by slithering out my nose in gobs of gunk…. *ahem*.

    But in spite of the above objections, I did download the Kindle app and three books to go along with it. First off, the price was right (they were all FREE) and second, one was an out-of-print book by a published writer and another a short story by an author whose work I’ve heard about but not sampled. The third is a book about creativity, which is something I’m always a sucker for reading about.

    So, what does it mean when a holdout like me actually gets some e-books? Well, first I have to get around to reading them, but the truth is e-books are growing and people are getting more used to reading onscreen. Here’s yet another article by an e-book skeptic-turned-fan. I expect to be reading conversion accounts of many more.

    What about you? Do you e-book? What are your thoughts?

    friday fun on hiatus

    Friday Fun is on hiatus for the rest of the summer. I’ll still post, but I’m focusing most of my creative energy on Quartz. :)

    fairy tales 3: picture books

    More on fairy tales here and here.

    Miss M’s absolutely favorite princess may be Snow White, but her absolutely favorite fairy tale book is Barbara McClintock’s Cinderella (a bargain for a dollar at a used store; little did I know how much she would love it). Filled with delicate illustrations and replete with details, this gentler Cinderella story ends with her family being sorry for how they treated her and her forgiving them all (and also finding suitable noblemen for her stepsisters to wed). Thanks to this book the phrase, “ran like a startled deer” entered Miss M’s vocabulary.

    Jan Brett’s Beauty and the Beast is a feast for the eyes, featuring exotic animals as the Beast’s bespelled servants. Miss M and I have spent a long time poring over the pages; there is so much to discover in the pictures themselves. Luscious and courtly.

    We recently discovered Trina Schart Hyman’s illustrated retellings of Snow White and The Sleeping Beauty. These are darker, featuring medieval costumes and architecture in a palette of earth colors. Be warned that the text of Snow White references cannibalism (the Queen eats what she believes are Snow White’s liver and heart) and death by unusual punishment (being forced to dance in red-hot shoes), both of which I smoothly edited out. The Sleeping Beauty also has one rather grim double-spread of illustrations depicting skeletons and corpses of young men pierced by thorns (I hurried past that one because it bothered me).  From an adult perspective, these illustrations feel truer to the original stories, evoking dark magics, wild forests and stone castles. The princesses also come across as more real than your usual sanctified versions; Snow White is childlike in her fear, innocence and exuberance and Briar Rose is downright mischievous and outgoing.

    Miss M. also enjoyed Paul Zelinsky’s Rapunzel, which sets the story in sun-drenched Renaissance Italy. I love the architectural details of this one.

    Moving on from traditional princesses (who are a tad too passive and victimized for my tastes), we have another one of Miss M. favorites: The Paper Bag Princess. After her castle is smashed and her princessy clothes burned by a dragon, Princess Elizabeth dons a paper bag and sets off after him to rescue her fiance, the proper Prince Ronald. The puffed-up-with-pride dragon is no match for the clever princess.

    In Snow Princess by Susan Paradis, a young girl playing in the snow imagines she is a royal princess awaiting the return of her father, the king. Beautiful beautiful pictures of ice castles, a court of animals, and the girl’s princess alter ego watching for her father on a magnificent white horse and leading him home on a dragon. Just lovely.

    Any other fairy tale picture books that you’ve enjoyed?

    keeping up the routine

    One of the great things about summer is the lack of a schedule. One of the bad things about summer is the lack of a schedule.

    With no school routine to anchor us; with plenty of one-time playdates and field trips to juggle; with all these one-week trips and camps to prepare for and keep track of, I’m just having a hard time getting into a writing routine. Even blogging has slid (as you can tell) (but I’m revising more diligently than blogging, so yay?).

    Then yesterday, I succumbed to my weakness for a good story and spent all Quiet Time and Post-Kids-Bedtime Time reading this awesome book I got for my birthday (thanks, Robin?). Yes, I am a full week ahead of where I thought I would be, but isn’t it a little too early to be resting on my laurels with more than half of Quartz still ahead of me?

    Don’t answer that.

    Okay, so now that I have flagellated myself with chocolate bar wrappers and the shredded remains of previous manuscripts, I can marshal all my troops for the next assault on Quartz.

    Some of the weapons at my disposal are:

    Mandatory Quiet Time and Strict Bedtime: Napping and non-napping children must have an hour and fifteen minutes of down time in the afternoon. They are to be separated and occupied with quiet activities and not allowed to disturb Mommy unless there is blood, breakage or burning. Also, bedtime is semi-strictly enforced (the olders come out at least two or three times afterward, ungh :P ).

    A Timer: I use this online timer to write in 10, 20, 40 or whatever-minute sessions. If I have a short period of time and I’m in danger of frittering it away entirely because I’ll be gone in X minutes, I set the timer for 10 minutes (I can fix at least a couple of sentences in that time, right?). If I’m settling in for a long evening, I break the time into 40-minute sessions, giving me time to stretch, drink water, walk around, mull things over in my head.

    Mundane Repetitive Housework: Washing dishes, sweeping, driving and folding laundry all keep my hands busy while giving me some headspace to think over my stories. Er, this would work better if I could focus only on Quartz and banish all the other ideas clamoring for my attention into the abyss.

    External Motivation: The Sunday progress update posts on this blog and a small group board on the HTRYN forum both keep me from backsliding too much. Furthermore, I have given everyone permission to poke me every now and again.

    So, how are you keeping motivated? Any tricks or tips you want to share?

    sunday progress update

    21 out of 63 scenes down.

    It’s been a busy week, as you can probably tell from the unplanned blogging hiatus. The kids started swim lessons (twice a week) again; we visited two museums; picked $25 worth of strawberries and made 12 jars of jam; and just enjoyed the beautiful weather we’ve gotten (again).

    And here I thought the summer would be a slow time for us. Silly me. :)

    And how are you all?

    city-inspired creativity

    1. Create a city skyline. Check here and here and here for cityscape projects for kids. Here are some skyline photos to get you inspired.
    2. Make a map of a city. This could be a street map, a subway map, the floor plan of a skyscraper or a museum. We made subway maps last week, featuring  fanciful names for stations. Our Red Line boasted names like Fire and Strawberry; the Purple Line had princessy names like Tiara and Sparkle; the Blue Line reveled in watery names such as Ripple and Wake; and the Green Line had nature and mineral names–Leaf, Tree, Emerald, Agate.
    3. Read some non-fiction about cities. These books about Hong Kong and Beijing on my to-read list.
    4. Write a couple of paragraphs describing a city, real or imaginary. Some aspects to think about and capture: the mood, the lighting, the architecture, the roads, the vehicles, the attitude of the people. Here’s one I did for my fantasy city, Blackburn.
    5. Pretend that you’re going on an all-expenses-paid week-long trip to the city of your choice. Plan your time there. Where will you go? What will you do? (Me, I’d go to either London and do as many of these walking tours as I could fit in, or Hong Kong. If I had to choose a city I haven’t already been to, I’d go to Sydney, Australia to visit Jo and have her show me around :D )
    6. Write a scene that takes place in a public area of a big city. It could be a chase through a crowded subway station; a quarrel at a major intersection; a reconciliation in the public gardens.